We are trying to be just friends
But how can I when once you were my everything
How can I unscramble my mind when you appear
How can I slow my heart when you are near
Can I get you out of my head when I miss you
Can I stop the butterflies when you look in my eyes
But yes, I want to get to know you again
Because you have forgotten who I am
Bri Radomsky
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This reads straight-forward and honest, which I think makes the piece easy to relate to. The "buttflies" line is my favorite, it fits the meaning & feel perfectly.
ReplyDelete-Kevin
Really good! It reminds me of the feeling of trying to be cool about something you aren't okay with. A secret love if you will. And the last two lines are gold
ReplyDelete^^^^^michelle martin. i always forget.. sorry!
ReplyDeleteAwe this is really good. Very deep in it's meaning. Good job Bri!
ReplyDeleteMax Helm
this is so cute! this is what like every girl thinks about and goes through
ReplyDeleteCathernineepr
Bri. wow.. way to go deep ;) I can really hear your voice in this. But for real, its good.. i like it! You go through a lot of different senses, and play off emotions.
ReplyDelete-rachel
i LOVEEEE this! seriously its so good. it's cute and relateable. WELL DONE!
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