Thursday, February 11, 2010

Passion

The deep breaths of love as the seductive taste of mangos and tangerines warms my mouth.

The feel of our bodies touching as we embrace.

That feel of you in my arms that you were once here.

But the warm feeling of you is gone.

Never again will our bodies touch and feel your warm passionate love.

-Brittany Grum

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  1. Artur K.February 12, 2010 at 4:15 AM

    Intense. I like it.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2010 at 5:54 AM

    I agree with Artur about the intensity. The first line? VERY sense oriented! And it works very well. "...the seductive taste of mangos and tangerines warms my mouth" is HOT. Pairing those exotic fruits with seduction is GENIUS. This isn't just any kind of love/passion-- this is an exotic, hyper-intense love/passion. Great idea.

    --Weidig

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